Comic 160 - 155

3rd Dec 2014, 12:05 AM in 5. The hospital
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Average Rating: 5 (17 votes)
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Seabiscuit 2nd Dec 2014, 3:40 PM edit delete
Seabiscuit
And so we finally see what he saw! Yay.

Sorry it took a bit longer to finally see...! It was necessary. Sorry if the middle panel is obnoxious; I wanted to try something different for it!

Hopefully the reveal is not too disappointing!

I feel bad for Jeff here. He really just doesn't know how to help.


Someday I'll get the hang of drawing shoulders, hands and the like. Someday, but that day is not today.


Oh! And, Jeff isn't bleeding crazily because...Jeff doesn't actually /bleed/. I contemplated changing my own rules just for the sake of getting to draw yet another blood pool (hehe) but ...no.:D

Comments:

catfire13 3rd Dec 2014, 12:18 AM edit delete reply
catfire13
0_o
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 12:47 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Yes.
;)
Vincethestick 3rd Dec 2014, 12:45 AM edit delete reply
Vincethestick
Dang.

Not disappointed, but dang it I was close! Let's hope he's just hallucinating and not, you know...seeing the future in an f-ed up way.
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 12:49 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heheh. It certainly wasn't a clown!;D

Oh, hopefully. It'd be terribly depressing if this came true!
Skweeee 3rd Dec 2014, 12:46 AM edit delete reply
Skweeee
I've crumpled up my theories of what's going on with Ben and thrown them in the trash. Back to the drawing board.

Seriously though, this story just got emotionally intense. I like how we are kinda seeing this through poor Jeff. And we ache for Ben as he does.

I'm not seeing any problems with your hands and shoulders. You are so friggin' consistent that you've successfully created your own set of rules, which work extremely well here.

Yeah. Blood. I'm competitive in the the blood department. There's lots coming in mine. So, if there's a trophy for bloodiest comic on comic fury, it's as good as mine.

I really enjoyed this page. Well done Sea.
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 12:52 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Hah!! I'm curious about those, now.;D

Thank you! I'm glad the emotion got through here, haha. I feel bad for doing this to my characters, alas. If they were real they'd probably kick my ass.

Wow, thank you! I guess it's not so much that they turned out badly here, but rather, drawing those is a huge pain for me haha. I don't know what it is, especially shoulders really screw me up and it takes me ages to get it just the way I want it.

Oh yeah Skweeee? You wanna play son? I'll kill off everyone in the next page! Right after each and every one of them vomits gallons of blood! Mwahaha!
(For reals though I'm even more hyped for your future pages now!)

Thank you again!!
lirvilas 3rd Dec 2014, 1:22 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
"I'm competitive in the blood department"

"I'll kill off everyone in the next page!"

Did I miss the memo, or is it ComicFury hold-your-characters-hostage week?!
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 10:33 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heheheh. Let the blood bath begin!
Edward Carter 15th Jan 2018, 12:22 AM edit delete reply
Edward Carter
Hi Skweeee. I should tell you about the time I committed sentient-ant genocide.
bejjinks 3rd Dec 2014, 1:33 AM edit delete reply
bejjinks
Ever notice how a single word can change everything again.
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 10:33 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heh! Very true...
randomNPC 3rd Dec 2014, 1:45 AM edit delete reply
randomNPC
Oh no! º_º
That was unexpected...
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 10:34 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heh! I sure hoped so! ;D
ChilPhil 3rd Dec 2014, 8:38 AM edit delete reply
ChilPhil
Ah, now we understand why he freaked out. Now there are more questions, why did he see that vision? And where did Jeff's head go?
There has been good story progression that leaves the reader coming back for more.



Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 10:36 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heheh. We understand some but yet so little.
Thank you very much!;D
Miaubol 3rd Dec 2014, 9:44 AM edit delete reply
Miaubol
Forsight? Or "just" madness? I must know...

Yay for "obnoxious middle panels".

And, well, Jeff may not have blood in the typical way. But how about some other type or liquid, some gory, sludgy stuff ..? :P Less may be more though. ;)
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 10:37 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heh, we shall see! But it may be a while sadly...

Haha, I did consider adding something like green stuff for his 'blood', but I decided against it in the end somehow.
demcleod 3rd Dec 2014, 12:57 PM edit delete reply
demcleod
Time for Ben to find a local pharmacy and stock up on antipsychotics. I'm on Zyprexa. It helps a LOT!
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 1:12 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heh! Well, he'd be hard pressed to find a pharmacy...;D
Binyamin 3rd Dec 2014, 1:50 PM edit delete reply
Binyamin
Finally! The reveal! I really like Benjamin's expressions through this page. Although, I have to wonder: how does he know that the headless corpse was Jeff?
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 1:57 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heheh. The wait was hard for me!
Thank you! I was really looking forward to drawing him like that.:D

Well, it's prroooobably safe to assume; same shirt, and in such close proximity to the dead Felix, haha.
sephirencomics 3rd Dec 2014, 3:33 PM edit delete reply
sephirencomics
An unexpected reveal! Poor Benjamin though...
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 3:38 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heheh! I sure hoped it was surprise at least a bit!
Oh yes...Poor Benny really has seen something awful!
Stever 3rd Dec 2014, 6:31 PM edit delete reply
Stever
Oh man, that was a good twist. I can see why it scared the paint out of him.
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 6:51 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Haha, thanks! I wanted it to be at least a bit surprising, seems like it was.;D
Yup! That'd be quite a horrible thing to find for sure.
(Scared the 'paint' out of him! Hah!!)
machinehead 3rd Dec 2014, 7:10 PM edit delete reply
machinehead
In all due fairness without the head it's hard to make a positive ID.
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 7:16 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heh, true, true. No teeth left and all that!
Lt. Dom 3rd Dec 2014, 7:39 PM edit delete reply
Lt. Dom
so many things this could be! I hope it's not a glimpse into the future...
Seabiscuit 3rd Dec 2014, 7:52 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Heh! Let's hope not! It'd make me sad to kill them off again.;D
Neonfluzzycat 8th Dec 2014, 5:32 AM edit delete reply
Neonfluzzycat
Oh damn
Outlaw 11th Dec 2014, 7:53 AM edit delete reply
Outlaw
Woah... that middle panel...
Seabiscuit 11th Dec 2014, 10:20 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Hehehehehe. Yes. Definitely one of my favorite bits to date! >:D
AlphaCalibri 27th Nov 2015, 3:10 AM edit delete reply
AlphaCalibri
So he saw them dead, huh...
Kinda like a messed up prophetic vision
What does this mean?

Hmmm...
Edward Carter 15th Jan 2018, 12:21 AM edit delete reply
Edward Carter
Holy different art-type, Batman!
Seabiscuit 17th Jan 2018, 8:05 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
It's amazing how that happens, huh? I didn't even make any conscious changes, and yet...